In its original form
the figurine
powerful in sight
for its spectacular
formation gleams
amongst the waters
surface nearby
reflected imagery
gives illusions
that it is bigger
grander, more elusive
than the original
structure itself
-Jennie Nawrocki
Nov28
amongst….really..not amidst, or amid, or better yet…don’t let this comment be more than an after thought.
Grammar was never my strong point but I will keep it in mind from now on.