stories conveyed
over days occurred
within greetings
a message to be heard
sincere appreciation
amongst plans discussed
for the new week
brings us closer
than the past
-Jennie Nawrocki
stories conveyed
over days occurred
within greetings
a message to be heard
sincere appreciation
amongst plans discussed
for the new week
brings us closer
than the past
-Jennie Nawrocki
nice flow and better word choice, for example … conveyed and the almost anachronistic amongst
Regards,